I wrote a comment on Tina's blog and got
inspired and this is the product of that.
Throughout our discussions of The Sun
Also Rises, I sympathized with Brett, but not because of the hardships she
went through. I sympathized with her because Hemingway's portrayal of her
character was undeveloped and shallow. She was seen only through Jake's
"male gaze" (as used by Tina), meaning the only aspects of her
individuality that were described and valued were her physical appearance and
sexuality. Brett is first described by Jake as "damned good-looking,"
and he proceeds to describe her appearance in great detail. The reader learns
exactly how Brett's hair looks and what material her skirt is made of, but we
don't know anything about her occupation, education, or interests. Contrasting
Brett's introduction with Robert Cohn, the reader learns from the first
line of the novel that he "was once a middleweight boxing
champion of Princeton." Despite the fact that Jake hated Cohn, Jake
reveals more about him from the first sentence of the novel than about Brett
from the entirety of the story. Brett is what Gillian Flynn, author
of Gone Girl, would call the Cool Girl. To get a sense of what that
means, here is an excerpt from Flynn's novel:
"She’s a cool girl. Being the Cool Girl means I am a hot,
brilliant, funny woman who adores football, poker, dirty jokes, and burping,
who plays video games, drinks cheap beer...and jams hot dogs and hamburgers
into her mouth...while somehow maintaining a size 2, because Cool Girls are
above all hot. Hot and understanding."
We talked about Brett being somewhat
androgynous in class, but I would argue that her masculine qualities stem from
this Cool Girl persona. Obviously video games were not as popular in the
20th century, but there are glaring similarities between the Cool Girl and
Brett's character. She is considered "one of the guys" because her
drinking habits match or exceed theirs. But even when she is drunk, Brett maintains
a level of flirtiness and composure that Mike, for example, does not have. In
fact, most of the male characters in the novel get rowdy, rude, or sloppy at
some point while under the influence. But Brett remains witty and carefree,
with "curves like the hull of a racing yacht," as Jake reminds
us.
The problem is, Cool Girl does not actually
exist; she is a figment of male imagination. Hemingway attempted to bring
this Cool Girl to "life" in the form of Brett. But because Cool Girl
is not real, this personification does not work because you cannot develop her
into a 3-Dimensional character. Her existence depends on there being males in
her life. When she is distressed, it is about her boy troubles, when she
is happy, it is because she is falling in love. I sympathize with Brett because
she had the potential to be a powerful character, with the same personality
development we see in the male principle characters. In other words, she
deserved an author who recognized the importance of developed female characters
and that Cool Girl does not count as one.
I 100% agree with you! The fact that all we get from Brett as a character is these superficial "cool girl" qualities is really problematic. It is also interesting because presumably when Hemingway was writing this novel, he didn't know much about this "cool girl" problem. We discussed in class that Hemingway based Jake off of himself, so was Hemingway just creating Brett to be his own "perfect woman" and superimposing this dream of his onto Jake or was he in some way aware what kind of character he was creating?
ReplyDeleteYou forgot the part about pretending to like chili dogs! I agree with you though, Brett's portrayal is exclusively through the male gaze, which leaves her feelingly unjustly shallow and undeveloped, especially compared to the other characters in the book.
ReplyDeleteYes! I agree with this so much I even reference it in my Hemingway essay! It's such a cruel creation of gender stereotypes. It's terrible that the "Cool Girl" persona is thrust upon to many women when no one can possibly actually be that way. Brett could have been a really rounded character if Hemingway hadn't made her into a gross fantasy of a girl.
ReplyDeleteWow great blog post. I forgot that we only see Brett from Jake's male point of view throughout the book. You bring up some great points, like how Jake concentrates on Brett's looks and clothing at some points in the novel. It would be super cool to see the same novel from Brett's point of view, and I feel like I would have sympathized withe her a lot more if I had gotten deeper insight into her character.
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